It is about a bad man called Zaruman that made 3 rings to the dwrvers, 4 to the elves and 9 to the men, but none of them knew that ther was one ring that rull them all and it bilong to Zaruman, and the only way to destroy it is to throu it in the volcanoe of Mordor.
One day a man killed Zaruman and the man did not destroy it because the ring poison him.
One day he lost the ring and a criatura name "Golum " toke the ring and after 7 years it belong to him until the ring was found by a Hobbit.
That hobbit give it to it´s grandson named frodo and the story is about frodo and his desteni to destroy the ring.
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ReplyDeletenice text michael and you have a good spelling congrats
ReplyDeletenice text mike and very good spelling o and i like very much your story
ReplyDeletenice text, it is organized and intersting, you had 3 or 4 sp mistakes.
ReplyDeletethe introductory paragraph its good but there are many , and very bad, spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHi mike :
ReplyDeleteYour text is not so coherent and you had sp.
Athough it is organized!!
Bye!!