Monday, April 27, 2009

My home town

HI I am mike and my favorite place in the world is New York because there are three very good places like the Empire State , it is the biggest building In new York . One time I went and I get up and I could see all new York.
Other great thing of new York is the biggest toys arus of the world, it is incredible there you can find all the toys you want, practically is a paradise for the kids.
Another grate pert of new York is the statue of liberty and is important of the independence of u.s.a in 1776.
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7 comments:

  1. armandApril 27, 2009 at 7:53 AM

    nice work michael bit i dont think the liberty statue is of the independence of u.s,a on 1776

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  2. juanpa mendozaApril 27, 2009 at 3:54 PM

    mike,you need to correct some grammar and spelling mistakes.In conclusion well done congrats!!!!

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  3. Daniela AndradeApril 29, 2009 at 4:10 PM

    mike the text is short and you have some spelling mistakes you could include more interesting information bye !!!!!

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  4. anamaMay 1, 2009 at 7:31 AM

    MIKE:
    the text has soem sp and oits a little short .
    i love nueva york too.
    att:anama

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  5. ...aDrI...May 1, 2009 at 1:47 PM

    Hi Mikie ... well your text is short and with some spelling mistakes but the part you write was interesting..... well done .. bye !!

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  6. chelsea fcMay 2, 2009 at 10:55 AM

    nice blog you have some spelling mistakes but good you interest me to go there.

    att sabtiago jaramillo mejia

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  7. pipe lunaMay 3, 2009 at 1:55 PM

    mike you have some spelling mistakes but you make me get intest in youre text

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