Monday, March 16, 2009

my legacy

Hi every body ,my new post is about my legacy!!!!!!!
My legancy is that i am going to make a big huge roller coster well a huge park but no any park the best of the world, will be so good that every one will now this park.
and half of the mony that i win will go to poor schools, hospitals, poor childs of the street and to construct houses for very poor families.
so if you once go have in mind that is for a good reason you pay for.
by: mike
I hope it helps!!!!!!
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5 comments:

  1. chelsea fcApril 17, 2009 at 7:43 PM

    hi mike nice legacy you are going let the world . i hope that dream can be posible.

    in this part you have many common spelling mistakes like money that you write it mony and so oders nice legacy.
    bye att:santiago jaramillo mejia

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  2. ade caicedoApril 19, 2009 at 4:06 PM

    Hi mike
    Nice legacy and I want to be the first in your park.
    Be carefull with sp mistakes, capital letters when you start a sentence and that "I" is always in capital letter.

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  3. juanpa mendozaApril 19, 2009 at 5:12 PM

    mike,your legacy its interesting, you need to correct some spelling mistakes.Congtatulations.

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  4. luis kApril 21, 2009 at 4:12 PM

    Very nice legancy,I would like to go there,take care of your spelling mistakes.

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  5. sacaApril 21, 2009 at 7:29 PM

    hi
    i like it.
    i can anderstand all but you could put somu puntuation marks.

    bye
    continue writening.

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