Thursday, February 19, 2009

polar bear

hi every body my new post is about a polar bear that get on a hil of 100 feet in newfoundlands some people tri to save him so some of them go up and sleep the bear and tide up the polar bear so the polar bear sleep and he was hanging of two feet but sudenly one foot get out and then the polar bear go down of the hill but now ther are not 100 feet now they are like 20 or 30 feet so he go into the water if he awake he will kill every body so they pick him up and sleep him again and take him to a zoo.
my opinion is that the people could be more careful with the polar bear and tide him beter but they did a good thing that they did that day.
the end
by:mike dennis
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4 comments:

  1. armandMarch 2, 2009 at 6:04 AM

    Hy michael your summary is very well, but you forget to put capital letter, points, commas and all the punctuation marks, I like very much your blog bye g

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  2. VaLe GaLvIsMarch 2, 2009 at 6:12 AM

    hi mike!!
    very nice the text but you forgot all the punctuations mark like armand said!!correxct it!

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  3. anamaMarch 2, 2009 at 6:38 AM

    hi mike i understud te text....of the polar bears .... i dont see your opinion ...
    att: anama

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  4. luis kMarch 2, 2009 at 6:53 AM

    very complete and interesting;you need some punctuation marks

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